If my monsters are imagined, why do they trigger the motion sensor lights?

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  • <Al the Adventurer: That Magic Shouldn’t Work!> - Volume 2 by Lemon - ★★★★☆, 231 MynePages™ - Another great volume. The pacing is something that is especially outstanding in this series and worth talking about. Every moment of tension is followed by something relaxing that leads into build-up for the next tense moment. And each transition flows effortlessly into the next. And each volume ends on a perfect spot where it feels complete on one side, but you need to know what happens next on the other without feeling like a cheap cliffhanger. I don’t want to glaze some author after just two volumes, but I think this is one worth looking out for.

    <The Amazing Village Creator: Slow Living with the Village Building Cheat Skill> - Volume 5 by Shichio Kuzu - ★★☆☆☆, 107 MynePages™ - Another meh volume.

    <A Journey Through Another World: Raising Kids While Adventuring> - Volume 1 by Shizuru Minazuki - ★★☆☆☆, 140 MynePages™ - Everything is very convenient. For example, fighting is strictly prohibited in the adventurers guild, but when there needs to play out the typical hoodlum-picks-a-fight-with-the-newbie scene needs to play out, the staff is suddenly forbidden to step in so that the MCs can act on it themself in the most cliché way possible. Another example: campfire cooking is a staple of the genre, and so it has to be included here as well, obviously. The problem is that MC got the soup he was warming up over the campfire directly from the inn, and his storage freezes time (because obviously it does). Which means somehow his time-freezing storage lets just those bowls of soup cool down so that the campfire cooking in the dungeon requirement could be fulfilled. As I said, it’s awfully convenient when it needs to be, with no internal coherence to its own rules. There is also not a single unique idea in this volume. It’s like it was written by committee: “Hello, author. Here is a list of scenes that scored highly with our focus group test. We need you to fill in the space between them with some of those tropes from this second list of genre mainstays here. Hop on it; no need to think too deeply about it”.





  • <Genius in the Library: This Bookish Rookie Will Save the Day!> - Volume 1 by Misa Aoi - ★★★½☆, 188 MynePages™ - Great volume with a really unique concept I haven’t seen anywhere else. We’ve all seen series starting with a saint summoning a million times, but I’ve never seen a series that’s about what leads up to the summoning. Good stuff. And the protag is a bookworm, which is always a big plus. I have a few problems with the translation, though. There are a lot of anachronisms in it. Every couple of pages, there are modern phrases that just stand out like a sore thumb. And it’s not just the general writing style either. Characters that speak normally suddenly have an instance when they say “ya” instead of “you” for example. Or idioms like “head on a swivel”. There is a lot of stuff like that, but it’s so inconsistent. Almost as if the volume got sloppily rewritten and the remaining anachronisms were overlooked.

    <Your Castle’s Little Helper - Please feed me, I’ll work!> - Volume 1 by Kazuhito Minagi and PenekoR - ★★★☆☆, 153 MynePages™ - Just as comfy and wholesome as the cover makes it seem. There are a few less-comfy moments, but they get resolved quickly. I have to say, though, that I am not entirely happy with how the story developed (and about how I believe it will continue in the next volumes). If MC is playing the castle’s little helper role for all of two chapters, maybe don’t name your entire series after it.

    <A Young Maiden’s Growing Pains: I Reincarnated and All I Got Was This 100X Stat Buff!> - Volume 1 by Yuno Yozakura - ★★☆☆☆, 104 MynePages™ - Overly simplistic to the point where you couldn’t even consider it a guilty pleasure.






  • I am more of a purist. The way I see it, whatever is in the source should also be in the adaptation. For me, the adaptation work should be about how the same story/plot/narrative/information/etc. can be delivered in the new medium. If something was important enough to be mentioned in the source, it should be important enough to be in the adaptation as well. I absolutely agree that not everything has to be spelled out, but a quick hint that something has happened when it did so in the source is not spelling it out. As in the example, a quick glance down is enough, and it doesn’t need a voice-over of her thoughts or added dialogue of her asking why the spear tip is clean. But it makes all the difference between Romelia being some omniscient character and her being an observant one.

    In this Ray example, as an anime-only viewer, I personally just thought she had seen him during the fight and didn’t think more of it when she singled him out after the battle. But at no point did I get the impression that she was especially observant of the little details and that that is why she was able to help Ray. It might be a small thing, and it didn’t take away from the anime for me since I didn’t know that I got a different impression of the character, but that doesn’t change the simple fact that my impression of the character was different from what manga-readers had of her. And that’s a failed adaptation in my view. I’m not going to drop the show over it, but now that I know that the source handles the narrative so much differently, I’ll keep wondering what else they fucked up. You could also just say that I have Bookworm PTSD and am overly prickly about this sort of thing.